Analysis of Bald
I didn't need shampoo to clean my scalp; instead a glass of tainted water could excellently do the job,
On the other hand you required tones of bubbly froth to cleanse your hair; evacuate the petulant granules of dandruff neatly entrapped between your follicles.
I didn't need gleaming hair oil to smear on my head; all I had to do was clap it loudly with my bohemian palms,
On the other hand you required swanky ointments; antiseptic creams to keep the
conglomerate of your hair well in place.
I didn't need scintillating scissors to use on my scalp; it would appear wholesomely ludicrous even if I held one in close proximity with it,
On the other hand you required a plethora of sharp instruments; pairs of intricate razors; in order to occasionally trim the unruly tentacles of your hair.
I didn't need a brush to part my scalp; as it nimbly obliged to my scrubbing it with a dust cloth,
On the other hand you required a luxuriously serrated comb; to Meticulously
entangle the incorrigible knots formed in your long hair.
I didn't need to camouflage my scalp with a taut piece of cloth every time I
ventured out; as there was no danger of the wind blowing it away,
On the other hand you required to embellish yourself with a grandiloquent cap;
a host of flapping sunshades; in order to ensure that the thin wisps of your
hair didn't rip apart with the tenacious breeze.
I didn't need to incessantly browse my hands through my scalp; while attending
pompous parties,
On the other hand you required to sporadically run your fingers against your
cuticles; making sure that they remained stringently aligned.
I didn't need to wash my scalp after bathing in the saline ocean; instead let
it to dry over a natural course of time,
On the other hand it was inevitable for you to stand beneath a steaming shower; to annihilate all the poignant salt trapped in your greasy hair.
I didn't need to consume a battalion of salubrious vitamins to make my scalp
glisten; simply standing under the blazing sun itself; granted it an enchanting shine,
On the other hand you desperately required to procure every tonic available in
the market; to impregnate an artificial luster in your lifeless hair.
I didn't need to submerge my scalp into ravishing cologne to get noticed;
people profoundly admired the openness of my head wherever I went,
On the other hand you used to apply the most enticing of gel on your lackadaisical hair; and yet remained unnoticed.
I didn't need to coat my scalp with black chemicals; intermittently apply a
blend of paint and water to keep it in shape,
On the other hand you were exorbitantly conscious about the greyness in your
hair; painting it with brilliant dye; remained busy all day trying to pluck the
insipid strands of white.
Therefore it is my earnest prayer to you O! omnipresent Creator; to create me
without hair for the next 100 births; if I fortunately took birth on this soil as man,
For I considered myself infinite times luckier to remain bald; than suffer
from the unrelenting tyranny of possessing clusters of bushy hair.
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Metre | 110101111101011101011000101 1010110101110111110100100101101001011100 110110111111111111111101101001 1010110101010101110 0100111101 1101110111111101110010111101010011 101011010010011100111001001010100010010100111 1101011111111001111011011 10101101001101101000 010001000110111 11011101110111110011 10111111010110101 1010110101010011001001 011101010101101111 110101100101 1101101001111111010 1010 101011010101001110011 1101110110001 110111111010000110011 111100100111 10101110100011110101010101010101101101 11011010010111001111 1010101001010110110101 10101110000101011001001000 01010110101001101 11011011101100011110 10010010010011101011 1010111101010101111010010101010 11011111111000100010 11101011101 1010110110010101 1101110101101110110 1111 11111011110100101011 01110111110001111111 11010110011001011110 100101001010101101 |
Characters | 3,035 |
Words | 535 |
Sentences | 12 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 3, 2, 3, 5, 4, 3, 4, 3, 5, 4 |
Lines Amount | 38 |
Letters per line (avg) | 65 |
Words per line (avg) | 14 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 224 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 49 |
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