Analysis of Cloudy Day



Gray clouds
Casting skies
Painted over blue skies
Looking like suddenly rain
But I think God had other plans.
Somewhere in His big brain
He may do something else
To these dark skies
And transform it into
Maybe
Just maybe something else.

Perhaps repaint the skies
To other colors of the rainbow
Or perhaps readjust those
Heavenly jewels above
Challenging or perhaps
Divine in a small way.

But who knows the mind of God
But God Himself who
Created the Earth in 6 days
And on the 7th He rest
From His work.

Gray clouds
Cloudy overcast skies
Seems no hope for another
Blue sky day today
But maybe on the tomorrow
There maybe
Or perhaps maybe not
But we'll see...


Scheme Abbcxcdbefd bgxxxh xexxx Abxhgfxf
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (37%)
Metre 11 101 101011 1011001 11111101 10111 111101 1111 001101 10 110101 010101 11010101 101011 1001001 100101 010011 1110111 11011 0100101 0101111 111 11 10101 1111010 11101 1101001 110 101101 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 658
Words 121
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 11, 6, 5, 8
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 133
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted by Kenneth R. Jenkins on July 12, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kenneth R. Jenkins

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