Analysis of Coloring In The Spaces



Trying to understand
  why you marked up your body
  —I stared at the ink

The memory of your open promise
  still inside of me
   —unfulfilled

Retracing that promised memory
  with new symbols
   —stained forever

You colored in the empty spaces
  I was unable
   —or unwilling to see

(Villanova Pennsylvania: August, 2016)


Scheme XAX XAX AXX XXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 1111110 11101 0100111010 10111 01 010110100 1110 1010 110001010 11010 101011 01001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 318
Words 51
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on May 10, 2019

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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