Analysis of The Lie



Your arms lift me up,
  as your words take me down

And I’m caught in-between
  your smile and frown

Your eyes making promises,
  your words yet to keep

My spirit in limbo,
  my heart left to weep

A soul now in turmoil,
  my mind double dealt

As your fear and your passion
  collide

What’s to be known,
  and what’s to be felt

Is it your words or your actions
  —that lie

(Villanova Pennsylvania: June, 2016)


Scheme XA XA XB XB XC XX XC XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 111111 011001 1101 1110100 11111 110010 11111 01101 11101 1110110 01 0111 00111 11111110 11 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 399
Words 75
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 34
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on April 28, 2019

Modified on March 13, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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