Analysis of Fate's Retort



To live within the moment,
  and write as love does now befriend

“Light shining brightest as
         hours grow short”

A beginning reunites with
  the journey’s end

“Memory imploding
          on fate’s retort”

A window reopens,
  my heart beats faster still

“Epiphany’s march
         neither to nor from”

To be saved in a final breath,
    one last line to say I will

“The past and future
          left exposed—undone”

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2016)


Scheme XA XB XA XB XC XX XC XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010 01111101 110101 1011 0010011 0101 100010 111 010010 111101 11 10111 11100101 1111111 01010 10101 010010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 499
Words 69
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 20, 2019

Modified on March 12, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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