Analysis of The Prison



This prison I’ve created…
  totally self made

This world I’ve evaded
  the fodder I trade

The reward is the punishment
  for not taking part

Old scars not to heal
  as I wait in the dark

The consensus, the polling,
  all truth on the run

Their shadows of misery
  no day in the sun

The price of the membership
  an eternity black

With dealers and charlatans
  all looking back

This prison I’ve created…
  by rejection self made

This world I’ve evaded
  the fodder I trade

No verity in circumstance
  my horse trails the cart

These bars I look out from
   —a last lonely heart

(Villanova Pennsylvania: July, 2015)


Scheme Ab CB xd xx xe xe xf xf Ab CB xd xd x
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 1101010 10011 111010 01011 00110100 11101 11111 111001 0010010 11101 111100 11001 011010 101001 1100100 1101 1101010 101011 111010 01011 1100010 11101 111111 01101 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 602
Words 107
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on January 24, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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