Analysis of The Promise



I discovered this morning
  after all these years,
  that everyone is really different
  from me

Whether rich or poor
  black or then white,
  it goes far beneath the surface
  to see

When I look in their eyes
  only questions stare back,
  as I try to keep my thoughts
  to myself

But along with those thoughts
  comes the promise I bear,
  and its hard to stay up
  on the shelf

(Villanova Pennsylvania: April, 2015)


Scheme XXXA XXXA XXBC BXXC X
Poetic Form
Metre 1010110 10111 110110100 11 10111 1111 11101010 11 111011 101011 1111111 11 101111 101011 011111 101 01001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 402
Words 73
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on January 19, 2019

Modified on March 13, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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