Analysis of A Melody Unsung



Can you be distracted by the critic
  or the public acclaim

Can you see through the fire
  and renew all that’s burned

Can you look past the signposts
  and those messages fixed

Can your heart stay undamaged
  as the world tempts your soul

Can you run through loud voices
  with yours still unspoken

Can you make it to tomorrow
  without leaving today

Can you give love to those hateful
  with vengeance recalled

Can you carry your grandfather’s words
  into the land of the unborn

Can you hang up your spear
  inside the enemy camp

Can you live to see the beginning
  and the end die at last

Can your voice remain pure
  neither bartered nor loaned

Can you listen through the smoke
   —for a melody unsung

(Villanova Pennsylvania: April, 2015)


Scheme XX XX XX XX XX XX AX XX XX XX XX XX A
Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 1110101010 101001 1111010 001111 111101 011001 111110 101111 1111110 111010 1111101 011001 11111110 11001 11101101 01011011 111111 0101001 111110010 001111 111011 101011 1110101 1010001 01001010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 726
Words 130
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on January 18, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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