Analysis of Eight Miles Left



(From My 'Searching For Crazy Horse' Collection)
                   'Read In Elko Years Ago'

With ten more miles of wire
  my horse wants to turn back

There’s dark clouds over the mountain
  just a small tent in my sack

The fence line sits all busted
  from two bulls that went astray

They both missed being neutered
  last year on roundup day

My hands are cold and blistered
  that salve jar all but gone

Two wolves begin to howling
  that lonesome prairie song

The storm clouds now have thickened
  light pulls its covers back

Just one more night on the western slope
  —with eight miles left to track

(Villanova Pennsylvania: March, 2018)
              'Wrtten in 2006


Scheme AX XB AB XC DC DX XX XB XB XX
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11101101010 1010101 1111110 111111 11110010 1011011 0111110 1111101 1111010 11111 1111010 111111 1101110 110101 0111110 111101 111110101 111111 0100101 10
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 656
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 50
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on October 27, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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