Analysis of Jaded And Hoping



The signpost a warning
  a resting black swan

Its flight to perdition
  last call from beyond

With roses ungifted,
  their thorns bury deep

Last moon a reminder
  a reckoning steep

The doctor’s watch broken
  your time shorter still

His prognosis a token
  beyond suture or pill

He asks if you’re ready,
  you say that you’re not

You ask if it matters…
  the main lesson untaught

And into the night
  you try once again

To find deeper meaning
  to reach beyond blame

But those last final minutes
  only serve to remind

What the jaded and hoping
   —are never to find

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2014)


Scheme AB BC CD XD EF EF GX XC XX AX XH AH G
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Metre 01010 01011 1111 11101 1101 11101 110010 01001 010110 11101 1010010 011011 111110 11111 111110 01101 00101 11101 111010 11011 1111010 101101 1010010 11011 010010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 593
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on October 17, 2018

Modified on April 24, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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