Analysis of My Mojo Light - Blues Poem #12



My days and nights
  death in between
  trouble in front—behind

The devil hijacking my
  fondest dream
  trouble in front—behind

She said she loved me
  then said it twice
  trouble in front—behind

The day I got fired
  she turned to ice
  trouble in front—behind

I pass out stoned
  and wake up hard
  trouble in front—behind

With time my warden
  and sentence scarred
  trouble in front—behind

My children’s names
  now others call
  trouble in front—behind

The doctor warns…
  “Not one more fall”
  trouble in front—behind

Excuses inked
  across my chest
  trouble in front—behind

The good got better
  but the worst got best
  trouble in front—behind

My eyes stay swollen
  my mojo light
  trouble in front—behind

The river rolling
  the falls in sight
  trouble in front—behind

(Villanova Pennsylvania: August, 2018)


Scheme xxA xxA xbA xbA xcA dcA xeA xeA afA xfA dgA xgA x
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 1001 100101 010101 101 100101 11111 1111 100101 011110 1111 100101 1111 0111 100101 11110 0101 100101 1101 1101 100101 0101 1111 100101 0101 0111 100101 01110 10111 100101 11110 1101 100101 01010 0101 100101 01001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 817
Words 127
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 48
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on August 28, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

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