Analysis of A Promise Forgotten



Are you the hero of your own
  dime novel

Are you the toy at the bottom
  of the cracker jacks box

Are you the name on the wall
  of the public bathroom

Are you the saline solution
  they use to detox

Are you that groove in the record
  that repeats over again

Are you a promise forgotten
  carried off by a friend

Are you a serial spectator
  whose ticket’s not punched

Are you a banquet disaster
  in search of your lunch

Is your mirrored reflection
  left empty and cold

Is the one option left you
  —forlorn but foretold

(Villanova Pennsylvania: August, 2018)


Scheme XX XA XX BA XX BX CX CX BD XD X
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111 110 11011010 101011 1101101 10101 11001010 1111 11110001 1011001 11010010 101101 11010100 11011 11010010 01111 1110010 11001 1011011 01101 01001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 548
Words 102
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 40
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on August 13, 2018

Modified on April 20, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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