Analysis of Pulling Away



At eighteen,
  I was ninety percent body
  and ten percent mind

…but over the years that trend has reversed

Now,
  I’m ten percent body
  and ninety percent mind

…whose biology Father Time chose to curse

My mind
  is now winged
  like a high soaring hawk

…with youth the small price for what’s known

All limits
  have lifted
  old burdens have gone

…as my spirit pulls hard to let go

(Villanova Pennsylvania: July, 2018)


Scheme XAB X XAB X BXX X XXX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 101 11100110 01011 1100111101 1 110110 010011 10100101111 11 111 101101 11011101 110 110 11011 111011111 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 429
Words 73
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 3, 1, 3, 1, 3, 1, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on July 15, 2018

Modified on March 11, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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