Analysis of The Claiming Race



Fame means part of you
Maybe all of you
Belongs to someone else
Someone vicarious in their intent
Insatiable given their adulation
Proprietary,
Eschewing personal risk or harm
Watching from the comfort
Of either praise or blame
They claim your soul like a
Racehorse
When you win their hearts
Leaving your memory abandoned
 —when dissident odds prevail

(Villanova Pennsylvania: January, 2015)


Scheme AAXXXBXXXXXXXX B
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11111 10111 01111 101000101 0100101010 0100 10100111 101010 110111 111110 1 11111 101100010 1100101 010010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 381
Words 61
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 14, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 162
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 22, 2018

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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