Analysis of My Present Spins
In limbo from indecision,
on loan from futures past
Deceit became my calling card,
deception first and last
Borrowing from a fantasy,
while stealing from a lie
The treadmill turned inside itself,
my spirit churning blind
But within this dark implosion,
a voice would call my name
And in its words I heard “escape,”
an exit from the shame
In hopes of a new becoming,
old guilt I cast remiss
As inside out, and outside in,
my present—spins in bliss
(Villanova Pennsylvania: June, 2017)
Scheme | AB XB XX XX AC XC XD XD X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01010010 111101 01011101 010101 10010100 110101 0110101 110101 10111010 011111 00111101 110101 01101010 111101 10110110 110101 0100101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 489 |
Words | 85 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 43 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 9 |
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