Analysis of Blues Poem #11



Baby don’t you stay with me,
  Baby don’t you go

Baby what you get from me,
  what you got to show

Baby get away from me,
  Baby don’t you go

Baby why you hangin round,
  Baby don’t you know

Baby don’t you stay with me,
  Baby don’t you go

Baby there’s a whistle blowin,
   callin sweet and low

Baby stay away from me,
  Baby don’t you go

Gotta hop that mornin freight,
  Baby—don’t you know

(Villanova Pennsylvania: June, 2017)


Scheme AB ab aB xb AB cb aB xb c
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111 10111 1011111 11111 1010111 10111 101111 10111 1011111 10111 1010101 1101 1010111 10111 101111 10111 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 433
Words 79
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 35
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on June 16, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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