Analysis of The Girl In The Chuck Taylor All-Stars



Her hair blown free,
  with eyes ablaze

She walked toward me,
  through morning haze

Her steps unmeasured,
  her cutoffs tight

Eyes palest blue,
  the lightest light

Would I speak first,
  would she respond

In ten more seconds,
  her image gone

Our shoulders brush,
  she passes by

My arm goes numb,
  my heart on fire

I had no choice,
  I’d lost control

My breathing stopped,
  I’d play the fool

And looking back,
  all fear defied

An all-star waited,
 —her ‘Chucks’ untied

(Villanova Pennsylvania: April, 2017)


Scheme AB AB CC XC CC XX XX XX XX CX XC CC X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (64%)
Metre 0111 1101 11011 1101 011 011 1101 0101 1111 1101 01110 0101 10101 1101 1111 11110 1111 1101 1101 1101 0101 1101 11110 0101 01001010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 500
Words 84
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 30
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on April 18, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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