Analysis of Into Their Hands



Dreams, like orphaned water lilies,
float across the surface

Ferrying my last token wish,
adrift—this silver pond

The swans make way,
as faith glides freely upon the wind

Carrying my fervent hopes
into this moment, present sent

Their petals weaving in the breeze,
to spin and turn as one

Silhouettes change and soften,
as the mirrored distance calls

Arriving at the far bank,
two children play and laugh together

With pant legs high and feet immersed,
splashing to and fro

Smiling to each other, their laughter
churns a magic torrent

As they reach into its spray,
and take my dream into their hands

(Villanova Pennsylvania: March, 2017)


Scheme AX XX BX XX AC CX XD XX DX BX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101010 101010 10011101 011101 0111 111100101 1001101 01110101 11010001 110111 011010 1010101 0101011 110101010 11110101 10101 101110110 101010 1110111 01110111 0100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 618
Words 107
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on March 30, 2017

Modified by KurtPhilipBehm on August 21, 2019

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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