Analysis of There I Made My Church



Flying above the torment and fray,
  the blood drops from my wings

The scars I carry to then remind,
  the true cost delivery brings

The clouds incumbent upon my soul,
  their cover not to hide

But frame a backdrop of life ahead,
  where on Angels wings I ride

My time below and my time above,
  both present in me now

As the essence calls from which I’m made,
  to return and shout aloud…

“I travelled the earth both far and wide,
  its truth did I then search

But wisdom came to me instead,
 —and there I made my church”

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2017)


Scheme XA XA XB CB XX XX BD CD X
Poetic Form
Metre 10010101 011111 011101101 01101001 010100111 110111 11011101 1110111 110101101 110011 101011111 1010101 110011101 111111 11011101 011111 010010100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 557
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 48
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 16, 2017

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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