Analysis of The Empty Bed



A father teaches a son
  everything he knows . . .

Sometimes, it
  isn’t enough

Furrows plowing, seedlings
  dying, a daughter screams,

As young Johnny goes off
  to the city

A step-child of his
own desire

Wandering the avenues
  and alleyways

Searching high in the lights
  for his name

But only a shadow
comes down from the neon

Dark and invisible
   as he walks

A soul without
  acceptance

A new emptiness fills
  the hardened cracks,
  —and hallowing cement void

Where the stench of severed roots
and singed beginnings,
  —meet and die

And from 1000 miles
   a father walks in the darkness,
  —ancient and alone

Passing an empty bed
  in a dimly lit country hallway,
  —asking why

(Chicago Illinois: July, 1977)


Scheme XX XX AX XX XX XX XX XX XX XX XXX XAB XXX XXB B
Poetic Form
Metre 0101001 1011 011 101 11010 100101 111011 1010 01111 1010 100010 010 101001 111 11001 111010 100100 111 0101 010 011001 0101 01011 1011101 01010 101 011 01010010 10001 101101 00101101 101 01011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 703
Words 117
Sentences 4
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on December 02, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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