Analysis of Writing Checks You can't Cash



Do you live your whole life,
  in a partially filled space

Do you swear up and down,
  about reasons defaced

Do you sing in a choir,
  where the music has died

Do you brand all as liars,
  as your knots are untied

Do you rob from the master,
 —just to steal from the slave

Do you live in a mansion,
  built on top of your grave

Do you look for direction,
  on trails hollow and thin

Does your soul beg correction,
  torn away from within

Do you begin every sentence,
  tracing back to the past

Do you live every moment,
—writing checks you can’t cash

(Villanova Pennsylvania: March, 2016)


Scheme XX XX AB XB AC DC DE DE XX XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 0010011 111101 011001 1110010 101011 1111110 111101 1111010 111101 1110010 111111 1111010 111001 1111010 101101 110110010 101101 11110010 101111 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 574
Words 109
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 41
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on March 03, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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