Analysis of Apple Picking



As light drizzle fell we snapped branches
Of length and urged them to bring down
Apples.

Shaking tattered limbs or swiping
At single crabs
Apples dropped
(A confirmation of Newton’s theory).

Using our jackets as baskets or bags
We then gathered as many as we could
And dashed of from the wrath of
The farmer…

By the time of arrival at our homes
We had devoured many a crab
(Gathering a legacy of tummy ache)
While those left over went into
Mother’s home made jam.
Mother being led to believe
That farmer X granted
Whatever fruit seasonal winds
Had scattered- unaware of the joy
We shared shaking, groping, and grasping.


Scheme XXX AXXX XXXX XXXXXXXXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 111011110 11011111 10 10101110 1101 101 00101110 10101011011 1110110111 0111011 010 10110101101 110101001 10001001101 11110101 10111 10101101 110110 1011001 11001101 111010010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 610
Words 110
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 10
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on February 21, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Liam Ó Comáin

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