Analysis of Till The Time He Commanded
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would dance; please the entire world incessantly with his tantalizingly swishing movement,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would speak; pacifying the infinite myths of people existing on this globe; with the prudent essence of his knowledge,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would write; inundating boundless number of blank paper with exquisite literature,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would sight; admiring all the mesmerizing beauty that was prevailing and embedded on this planet,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would perspire; working all day under the sweltering Sun; running for countless kilometers on the trot in heart
of the gruesomely chilly night,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would love; flooding every part of the still atmosphere with the poignant fire of his romance,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would sleep; relishing the blissful calm of the breeze; the mystical enchantment of the prolifically star studded darkness,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would valiantly fight; shedding his blood without the slightest of hesitation for the sake of his sacrosanct motherland,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would smile; impart the essence of equality and unbiased brotherhood to as far and wide as possible amongst tangible mankind,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would bathe; drenching every pore of his skin with supremely ravishing water; splashing tons of it around in ecstatic frolic on little children,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would sing; captivating this monotonously strangulated world with the delectable cadence in his voice,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would run; conquering impregnable milestones at every single step he took; wave the flag of amicable victory on each chunk of visible soil,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would dig; building a dwelling for himself as well as for all those who wandered in inexplicable affliction without a roof under the colossal sky,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would joke; making overwhelmingly sad people laugh with his astoundingly hilarious and comic banter,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would earn; assimilating the entire wealth that could ever have existed on land; disseminating it judiciously amongst people who badly needed it to resurrect their lives,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would yawn; relaxing on the lush green meadows in due admiration of the Sun God; reciting a flurry of vivid tales to mercilessly orphaned children starving to loneliness without their parents,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would exotically dream; perceiving the most wonderful objects which he had evolved; the unsurpassably beautiful garden which he had spawned for human kind to live and enjoy,
Till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would thunderously cry; sharing the grief of others with a sense of equality; providing his shoulder for them to lean upon in their time of unprecedented distress,
And till the time he commanded; this molecule of his would placidly live; inhaling in air every unfurling second; trying his Herculean best to maintain this planet of his as the ultimate paradise; trying his best to metamorphose all the evil hovering into a
fantasy that he the 'Creator' would really cherish; a fantasy that God had given birth to this molecule of his; to wholesomely satisfy.
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Metre | 101101011011111001010100111000110 101101011011111010011100101111010101110 101101011011111001010111011001000 1011010110111101010100101101000101110 101101011011101101110010011011001010101 101101 10110101101111101001101101010101101 101101011011111000101101010001010010011010 1011010110111100110110101010101011110010 101101011011110101010100010101110111000110011 101101011011111010011111010010010101110100101011010 10110101101111100111110010010011 10110101101111100010011100101111011100010011111001 10110101101111100101011111111100010001001011000101 101101011011111001001101110100010001010 101101011011110100001011110101011010010100011011010110111 1011010110111101010111010101011010010110111000101010110001110 10110101101111101001100101110101100101111110111001 1011010110111111001110101101000101101111010111010001 010110101101111001010011000101010101001101110111010010101110101010100010 1001100101101001001111011110111110 |
Characters | 3,614 |
Words | 591 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 19 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2 |
Lines Amount | 21 |
Letters per line (avg) | 141 |
Words per line (avg) | 28 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 155 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
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Submitted on February 15, 2016
Modified on March 05, 2023
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