Analysis of Fates Retort



To live beyond the moment,
        and write as love doth now befriend

It’s light burning brightest
        as my hours grow short

The beginning reunited
        with the journey’s end

All memory imploding
          on fates retort”

But the window stays open,
my heart beating faster still

All time enslaved in a final breath,
one last line to say—I will

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2016)


Scheme XA XB XA XB XC XC X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010 01111101 111010 111011 0010010 10101 1100010 111 1010110 1110101 110100101 1111111 010010100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 417
Words 61
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 41
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 07, 2016

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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