Analysis of Turning Black



To write poetry on the battlefield,
is to write poetry from the heart

Words to cover the scars and wounds,
--- grief peeling back like bark

As the verse flies like bullets,
and all bayonet's attach

The volley is sharpened and to the point,
--- the blood spilled, turning black

(Villanova Pennsylvania: April, 2015)


Scheme XX XX XX XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 111001010 111100101 11100101 110111 1011110 01101 0101100101 011101 01001010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 307
Words 54
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on April 03, 2015

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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