Analysis of Straddling The Flame



Through the fire,
  and across the lake

We made it to land,
  with our innocence raped

Its memory now enough,
   to scare and profane

What the future never promised,
  --- when we straddled the flame

(Villanova Pennsylvania: March, 2015)
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Scheme XX XX XX XX XX
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 1010 00101 11111 1101001 1100101 11001 10101010 111001 0100101 100111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 283
Words 46
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 43
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on March 31, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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