Analysis of Under My Muscles (Explicit Content)



Shut up! Shut the fuck up!
You are getting so under my skin,
You're getting under my muscles!
IT FUCKING HURTS!
I'm bleeding everywhere,
Oh, please give me a fucking Band-Aid!
You know what? FORGET IT!
LET ME FUCKING DIE!

You're the most annoying shithead I've ever met,
And I wanna break your fucking skull,
I'll grab you by the throat, and bite your neck
And suck your blood like a fucking vampire!
Yet your blood tastes like fucking Meth!
Now I have rotten teeth from it!
My own blood is poisoned from harming you,
NOW I'LL MAKE YOU DIE TWICE!!

Shut up! Shut the fuck up!
You are getting so under my skin,
You're getting under my muscles!
IT FUCKING HURTS!
I'm bleeding everywhere,
Oh, please give me a fucking Band-Aid!
You know what? FORGET IT!
LET ME FUCKING DIE!

You are so fucking disgusting at what you do,
What you say, what you think and what you are!
Your end is coming near, and I'm glad it's happening!
I'LL HAVE YOUR SOUL IN A CHOKE!
You breathe anything drugs and alcohol,
I breathe anything freedom, especially from you!
I'll make sure that your punishment is painful,
BECAUSE YOU DYING IS A MUST-HAVE FOR ME!

Shut up! Shut the fuck up!
You are getting so under my skin,
You're getting under my muscles!
IT FUCKING HURTS!
I'm bleeding everywhere,
Oh, please give me a fucking Band-Aid!
You know what? FORGET IT!
LET ME FUCKING DIE!

FUCKING STUPID FUCKING STUPID
WAIT UNTIL I GRAB MY FUCKING GUN!
FUCKING SHIT FUCKING SHIT
WAIT UNTIL I MAKE YOU FUCKING PAY!!

Shut up! Shut the fuck up!
You are getting so under my skin,
You're getting under my muscles!
IT FUCKING HURTS!
I'm bleeding everywhere,
Oh, please give me a fucking Band-Aid!
You know what? FORGET IT!
LET ME FUCKING DIE!


Scheme ABCDEFGH xixxxgjx ABCDEFGH jxxxxjix ABCDEFGH xxgx ABCDEFGH
Poetic Form
Metre 111011 111011011 11010110 1101 11010 111101011 111011 11101 10101011101 011011101 1111010111 0111101010 11111101 11110111 1111101101 111111 111011 111011011 11010110 1101 11010 111101011 111011 11101 111100101111 1111110111 1111010111100 1111001 11101010 11101001011 11111100110 01110101111 111011 111011011 11010110 1101 11010 111101011 111011 11101 10101010 101111101 101101 101111101 111011 111011011 11010110 1101 11010 111101011 111011 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,645
Words 308
Sentences 43
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 4, 8
Lines Amount 52
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 186
Words per stanza (avg) 44
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Submitted on December 10, 2014

Modified on March 10, 2023

1:37 min read
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Jesse Cochran

Inspired by the freestyle poetry of Walt Whitman and the musically driven attitude of metal musicians Slipknot and Mudvayne, Jesse Cochran is a new poet to join Poetry.net, and he writes poetry that is a little too honest. As a matter of fact, his style of poetry is supposed to be violent and full of language like a metal song's lyrics. But he does aim to write much happier poems once his more angry ones are out of his system. more…

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