Analysis of This Sepration Srom Thee My Love!



This sepration from Thee my Love!
I can't withstand.
Helpless you made me,
I may perish in this grief.
Love enter this dwelling,
I shall lock the doors.
Without you,i am extinguished and
Thrown out from this dwelling of love.
I may perish in this grief.
O My saaki you made me oblivious of my existence,
Now tell me whom have thee brefriended?
How could they be prettier than me Love?
listen I may perish in this grief.
In darkness, the pearl seller told me straight truth
The real Pearl lies hidden in a stone only.
Listen love, i may perish in this grief.

(Translation from Kashmiri by a K Mota)


Scheme abcDxxxaDxbadxcd x
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1101 10111 1110011 110110 11101 01110100 11111011 1110011 111111010011010 1111111 1111100111 101110011 01001101111 01111000110 1011110011 010101010110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 594
Words 114
Sentences 12
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 234
Words per stanza (avg) 56
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rasul Mir

Rasool Mir (Kashmiri: رسول مِیر) (died 1870) was one of the leading Kashmiri poets of the 19th century. He was born at Doru Shahabad, a historic town in the Anantnag district in Jammu and Kashmir. He was said to have been alive in 1855 AD when Mahmood Gami died. Rasul Mir died a few years before-Maqbool Shah Kralawari (d.1874). He is one of the most celebrated Kashmiri poets and is popularly called as the John Keats of Kashmir. He brought Gazal to Kashmiri poetry. Gazals with rivers, valleys, birds, fruits and imagery of Kashmir are his forte. One of his famous poems is: Translation: The last couplet of this poem is: Translation: It is believed that he formed his own way into the basic principles of poetry prevalent in his times and did not follow the conventional principles of poetry. He did not have any murshid (guide) but became the guide of many others following him.  more…

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