Analysis of In The Servants' Quarters

Thomas Hardy 1840 (Stinsford) – 1928 (Dorchester, Dorset)



'Man, you too, aren't you, one of these rough followers of the criminal?
All hanging hereabout to gather how he's going to bear
Examination in the hall.' She flung disdainful glances on
The shabby figure standing at the fire with others there,
Who warmed them by its flare.

'No indeed, my skipping maiden: I know nothing of the trial here,
Or criminal, if so he be. - I chanced to come this way,
And the fire shone out into the dawn, and morning airs are cold now;
I, too, was drawn in part by charms I see before me play,
That I see not every day.'

'Ha, ha!' then laughed the constables who also stood to warm themselves,
The while another maiden scrutinized his features hard,
As the blaze threw into contrast every line and knot that wrinkled them,
Exclaiming, 'Why, last night when he was brought in by the guard,
You were with him in the yard!'

'Nay, nay, you teasing wench, I say! You know you speak mistakenly.
Cannot a tired pedestrian who has footed it afar
Here on his way from northern parts, engrossed in humble marketings,
Come in and rest awhile, although judicial doings are
Moot by morning star?'

'O, come, come!' laughed the constables. 'Why, man, you speak the dialect
He uses in his answers; you can hear him up the stairs. So own it.
We sha'n't hurt ye. There he's speaking His syllables
Are those you sound yourself when you are talking unawares,
As this pretty girl declares.'

'And you shudder when his chain clinks!' she rejoined. 'O yes, I noticed it.
And you winced, too, when those cuffs they gave him echoed to us here.
They'll soon be coming down, and you may then have to defend yourself
Unless you hold your tongue, or go away and keep you clear
When he's led to judgment near!'

'No! I'll be damned in hell if I know anything about the man!
No single thing about him more than everybody knows!
Must not I even warm my hands but I am charged with blasphemies?'…
- His face convulses as the morning cock that moment crows,
And he stops, and turns, and goes.


Scheme XAXAA BCXCC DEXEE XFXFF XGXHH GBXII XJDJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 111101111110010100 11010110111011 001000111010101 010101010101101 111111 10111010111010101 11001111111111 00101101010101111 11110111110111 11111001 1111010011011101 0101010101101 101101101001011101 01011111110101 1011001 1111011111110100 1001001001110101 1111110101010100 1001011010101 11101 111101001111010 11001101111101111 11111111101100 1111011111001 1110101 01101111101111101 011111111110111 1111010111110101 01111111010111 1111101 111101111100101 1101011111001 11110111111111 111101011101 0110101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,961
Words 378
Sentences 27
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 217
Words per stanza (avg) 52
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Thomas Hardy

Thomas Hardy, was not a Scottish Minister, not a Moderator of the General Assembly of the Church of Scotland nor a Professor of Eccesiastical History at Edinburgh University. more…

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