Analysis of Aquae Sulis

Thomas Hardy 1840 (Stinsford) – 1928 (Dorchester, Dorset)



The chimes called midnight, just at interlune,
And the daytime talk on the Roman investigations
Was checked by silence, save for the husky tune
The bubbling waters played near the excavations.

And a warm air came up from underground,
And a flutter, as of a filmy shape unsepulchred,
That collected itself, and waited, and looked around:
Nothing was seen, but utterances could be heard:

Those of the goddess whose shrine was beneath the pile
Of the God with the baldachined altar overhead:
'And what did you get by raising this nave and aisle
Close on the site of the temple I tenanted?

'The notes of your organ have thrilled down out of view
To the earth-clogged wrecks of my edifice many a year,
Though stately and shining once - ay, long ere you
Had set up crucifix and candle here.

'Your priests have trampled the dust of mine without rueing,
Despising the joys of man whom I so much loved,
Though my springs boil on by your Gothic arcades and pewing,
And sculptures crude…. Would Jove they could be removed!'

' - Repress, O lady proud, your traditional ires;
You know not by what a frail thread we equally hang;
It is said we are images both - twitched by peoples desires;
And that I, as you, fail as a song that men time agone sang!' . . . . . . .

And the olden dark hid the cavities late laid bare,
And all was suspended and soundless as before,
Except for a gossamery noise fading off in the air,
And the boiling voice of the waters' medicinal pour.


Scheme ABAB CCCX DXDC EXEX FXFX BFXF GHGH
Poetic Form Quatrain  (57%)
Metre 0111111 001110100010 11110110101 010010110010 001111110 0010110111 1010010100101 101111000111 110101110101 10110110101 011111101101 1101101011 011110111111 10111111001001 11001011111 111100101 111100111011 010011111111 1111111100101 01011111101 011101101001 1111101111001 1111110011110010 01111110111111 0010110100111 01101001101 011011101001 00101101001001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,439
Words 267
Sentences 15
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 162
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:19 min read
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Thomas Hardy

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