Analysis of The White Moth

Sir Arthur Quiller-Couch 1863 (Bodmin, Cornwall) – 1944 (Cornwall)



IF a leaf rustled, she would start:  
 And yet she died, a year ago.  
How had so frail a thing the heart  
 To journey where she trembled so?  
And do they turn and turn in fright,
 Those little feet, in so much night?  

The light above the poet’s head  
 Streamed on the page and on the cloth,  
And twice and thrice there buffeted  
 On the black pane a white-winged moth:
’T was Annie’s soul that beat outside  
 And “Open, open, open!” cried:  

“I could not find the way to God;  
 There were too many flaming suns  
For signposts, and the fearful road  
 Led over wastes where millions  
Of tangled comets hissed and burned—  
 I was bewildered and I turned.  

“O, it was easy then! I knew  
 Your window and no star beside.
Look up, and take me back to you!”  
 —He rose and thrust the window wide.  
’T was but because his brain was hot  
 With rhyming; for he heard her not.  

But poets polishing a phrase
 Show anger over trivial things;  
And as she blundered in the blaze  
 Towards him, on ecstatic wings,  
He raised a hand and smote her dead;  
 Then wrote “That I had died instead!”


Scheme ABABCC DEXEFF XGXGHH IFIFJJ KLKLDD
Poetic Form Etheree  (33%)
Metre 1011111 01110101 11110101 11011101 01110101 11010111 01010101 11010101 0101101 10110111 11111111 01010101 11110111 10110101 1100101 1101110 11010101 11010011 11110111 11001101 11011111 11010101 111011111 11011101 11010001 110101001 01110001 01110101 11010101 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,110
Words 204
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 158
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Sir Arthur Quiller-Couch

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