Analysis of The Vineyard

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



At the eleventh hour he came,
But his wages were the same
As ours who all day long had trod
The wine-press of the Wrath of God.

When he shouldered through the lines
Of our cropped and mangled vines,
His unjaded eye could scan
How each hour had marked its man.

(Children of the morning-tide
With the hosts of noon died,
And our noon contingents lay
Dead with twilight's spent array.)

Since his back had felt no load ,
Virtue still in him abode;
So he swiftly made his own
Those last spoils we had not won.

We went home delivered thence,
Grudging him no recompense
Till he portioned praise of blame
To our works before he came.

Till he showed us for our good--
  Deaf to mirth, and blind to scorn--
How we might have best withstood
  Burdens that he had not born!


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGXX HHAA IJIJ
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 100101011 1110001 110111111 01110111 1110101 11010101 11111 11101111 1010101 101111 01010101 111101 1111111 1010101 1110111 1111111 1110101 101110 111111 11010111 11111101 1110111 1111101 1011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 748
Words 146
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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