Analysis of The Light That Failed

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



So we settled it all when the storm was done
As comfy as comfy could be;
And I was to wait in the barn, my dears,
Because I was only three.
And Teddy would run to the rainbow's foot
Because he was five and a man--
And that's how it all began, my dears,
And that's how it all began!

Then we brought the lances down--then the trumpets blew--
When we went to Kandahar, ridin' two an' two.
      Ridin'--ridin'--ridin' two an' two!
             Ta-ra-ra-ra-ra-ra-a!
             All the way to Kandahar,
      Ridin' two an' two.

The wolf-cub at even lay hid in the corn,
When the smoke of the cooking hung grey.
He knew where the doe made a couch for her fawn,
And he looked to his strength for his prey.
But the moon swept the smoke-wreaths away;
And he turned from his meal in the villager's close,
And he bayed to the moon as she rose.

"I have a thousand men," said he,
  "To wait upon my will;
And towers nine upon the Tyne,
  And three upon the Till."

"And what care I for your men? " said she,
  "Or towers from Tyne to Till?
Sith you must go with me," said she,
  "To wait upon my will.     

And you may lead a thousand men
  Nor ever draw the rein,
But before you lead the Fairy Queen
   'Twill burst your heart in twain."

He has slipped his foot from the stirrup-bar,
   The bridle from his hand,
 And he is bound by hand and foot
   To the Queen of Fairy Land.

"If I have taken the common clay
 And wrought it cunningly
In the shape of a God that was digged a clod,
 The greater honour to me."

"If thou hast taken the common clay,
 And thy hands be not free
From the taint of the soil, thou hast made thy spoil
 The greater shame to thee."

The lark will make her hymn to God,
  The partridge call her brood,
While I forget the heath I trod,
  The fields wherein I stood.

'Tis dule to know not night from morn,
But greater dule to know
I can but hear the hunter's horn
That once I used to blow.

There were three friends that buried the fourth,
The mould in his mouth and the dust in his eyes,
And they .went south and east and north--
The strong man fights but the sick man dies.

There were three friends that spoke of the dead--
The strong man fights but the sick man dies--
"And would he were here with us now," they said,
"The Sun in our face and the wind in our eyes."

Yet at the last  ere our spearmen had found him,
Yet at the last, ere a sword-thrust could save,
Yet at the last, with his masters around him,
He spoke of the Faith as a master to slave.
Yet at the last  though the Kafirs had maimed him,
Broken by bondage and wrecked by the reiver,
Yet at the last, tho' the darkness had claimed him,
He colled on Allah  and died a Believer!


Scheme xabacdbd eeexfe ghxhhbb aIxi aiaI xjxj fkck heca haxa lxlx gmgm nbnB oBob pqpqpfpx
Poetic Form
Metre 11101110111 11011011 0111100111 0111101 010111011 01111001 011110111 0111101 11101110101 11111001111 111111 1111110 1011100 1111 01111011001 101101011 11101101101 011111111 101101101 0111110011 011101111 11010111 110111 01010101 010101 011111111 1101111 11111111 110111 01110101 110101 101110101 111101 1111110101 010111 01111101 1011101 111100101 0111 00110111101 010111 111100101 011111 10110111111 010111 01110111 010101 11010111 010111 11111111 110111 11110101 111111 101111001 01011001011 01110101 011110111 101111101 011110111 0110111111 0101010010101 11011101111 1101101111 11011110011 11101101011 1101101111 1011001101 11011010111 11110010010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,662
Words 525
Sentences 25
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 7, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 8
Lines Amount 69
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 139
Words per stanza (avg) 37
Font size:
 

Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 14, 2023

2:37 min read
174

Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

All Rudyard Kipling poems | Rudyard Kipling Books

33 fans

Discuss this Rudyard Kipling poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "The Light That Failed" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/33485/the-light-that-failed>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    2
    days
    5
    hours
    37
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The opposite of poetry is _______.
    A Literalism
    B Somnolence
    C Verse
    D Prose