Analysis of The City of Sleep

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



Over the edge of the purple down,
Where the single lamplight gleams,
Know ye the road to the Merciful Town
That is hard by the Sea of Dreams--
Where the poor may lay their wrongs away,
And the sick may forget to weep?
But we--pity us! Oh, pity us!
We wakeful; ah, pity us! --
We must go back with Policeman Day--
Back from the City of Sleep!

Weary they turn from the scroll and crown,
Fetter and prayer and plough--
They that go up to the Merciful Town,
For her gates are closing now.
It is their right in the Baths of Night
Body and soul to steep,
But we--pity us! ah, pity us!
We wakeful; oh, pity us!--
We must go back with Policeman Day--
Back from the City of Sleep!

Over the edge of the purple down,
Ere the tender dreams begin,
Look--we may look--at the Merciful Town,
But we may not enter in!
Outcasts all, from her guarded wall
Back to our watch we creep:
We--pity us! ah, pity us!
We wakeful; oh, pity us!--
We that go back with Policeman Day--
Back from the City of Sleep!


Scheme AbabcdeeCD afafxdeECD AgagxdeEcD
Poetic Form Etheree  (23%)
Metre 100110101 101011 1101101001 11110111 101111101 00110111 111011101 111101 111110101 1101011 101110101 100101 1111101001 1011101 111100111 100111 111011101 111101 111110101 1101011 100110101 1010101 1111101001 1111100 1110101 1110111 11011101 111101 111110101 1101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 962
Words 196
Sentences 16
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 10
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 244
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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