Analysis of Our Lady of the Sackcloth

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



There was a Priest at Philae,
   Tongue-tied, feeble, and old;
And the daily prayer to the Virgin
   Was all the Office he could.

The others were ill-remembered,
   Mumbled and hard to hear;
But to Mary, the two-fold Virgin,
   Always his voice rang clear.

And the congregation mocked him,
   And the weight of the years he bore,
And they sent word to the Bishop
   That he should not serve them more.

(Never again at the Offering
   When the Bread and the Body are one:
Oh, never the picture of Mary
   Watching him serve her Son!)

Kindly and wise was the Bishop.
   Unto the Priest said he: -
“Patience till thou art stronger,
   And keep meantime with me.

“Patience a little; it may be
   The Lord shall loosen thy tongue
And then thou shalt serve at the Offering
   As it was when we were young.”

And the Priest obeyed and was silent,
   And the Bishop gave him leave
To walk alone in the desert
   Where none should see him grieve.

(Never again at the Offering
   When the Wine and the Blood are one!
Oh, never the picture of Mary
   Watching him honour her Son!)

Saintly and clean was the Bishop,
   Ruling himself aright
With prayer and fast in the daytime
   And scourge and vigil at night.

Out of his zeal he was minded
   To add one penance the more –
A garment of harshest sackcloth
   Under the robes he wore.

He gathered the cloth in secret
   Lest any should know and praise –
The shears, the palm and the packthread –
   And laboured it many ways.

But he had no skill in the making,
   And failed and fretted the while;
Till the stood a Woman before him,
   Smiling as Mothers smile.

Her feet were burned by the desert –
   Like a desert-dweller she trod –
Even the two-fold Virgin,
   Spouse and Bearer of God!

She took the shears and the sacking,
   The needle and stubborn thread,
She cut, she shaped, and she sewed them,
   And, “This shall be blessed,” she said.

She passed in the white hot noontide,
   On a wave of the quivering air;
And the Bishop’s eyes were opened,
   And he fell on his face in prayer.

But – far from the smouldering censers –
   Far from the chanted praise –
Oh, far from the pictures of Mary
   That had watched him all his days –

Far in the desert by Philae
   The old Priest walked forlorn,
Till he saw in the head of her Riders
   A Queen of the Desert-born.

High she swayed on her camel,
   Beautiful to behold:
And her beast was belled with silver,
   And her veils were spotted with gold!

Low she leaned from her litter –
   Soft she spoke in his ear: -
“Nay, I have watched thy sorrow!
   Nay, but the end is near!

“For again thou shalt serve at the Offering
   And thy tongue shall be loosed in praise,
And again thou shalt sing unto Mary
   Who has watched thee all thy days.

“Go in peace to the Bishop,
   Carry him word from me –
That the Woman who sewed the sackcloth
   Would have him set thee free!”


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Poetic Form Quatrain  (81%)
Metre 110111 111001 001011010 1101011 01001010 100111 111001110 11111 0001011 00110111 01111010 1111111 100110100 101001011 110010110 101101 10011010 100111 1011110 01111 10010111 0111011 0111110100 1111101 001010110 0010111 11010010 111111 100110100 10100111 110010110 101101 10011010 10011 1101001 0101011 11111110 1111001 0101101 100111 11001010 1101101 0101001 011101 111110010 0101001 101010011 101101 01011010 10101011 1001110 101011 11010010 0100101 11110111 0111111 1100111 101101001 00101010 01111101 111011 110101 111010110 1111111 1001011 011101 1110011010 0110101 1111010 100101 00111110 00101011 1111010 111011 1111110 110111 10111110100 01111101 0011111010 1111111 1011010 101111 10101101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,825
Words 532
Sentences 24
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 84
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:39 min read
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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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