Analysis of Macdonough's Song

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



Whether the State can loose and bind
In Heaven as well as on Earth:
If it be wiser to kill mankind
Before or after the birth--
These are matters of high concern
Where State-kept schoolmen are;
But Holy State (we have lived to learn)
Endeth in Holy War.

Whether The People be led by The Lord,
Or lured by the loudest throat:
If it be quicker to die by the sword
Or cheaper to die by vote--
These are things we have dealt with once,
(And they will not rise from their grave)
For Holy People, however it runs,
Endeth in wholly Slave.

Whatsoever, for any cause,
Seeketh to take or give
Power above or beyond the Laws,
Suffer it not to live!
Holy State or Holy King--
Or Holy People's Will--
Have no truck with the senseless thing.
Order the guns and kill!
 Saying --after--me:--

Once there was The People--Terror gave it birth;
Once there was The People and it made a Hell of Earth.
Earth arose and crushed it. Listen, O ye slain!
Once there was The People--it shall never be again!


Scheme ABABCXCX DEDEXFXF XXXXGHGHX BBXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10011101 01011111 111101111 0111001 11101101 11111 110111111 10101 1001011101 1110101 1111011101 1101111 11111111 01111111 110101011 10101 0101101 11111 100110101 101111 1011101 110101 11110101 100101 10101 11101010111 1110100110111 10101110111 1110101110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 958
Words 187
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 9, 4
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 187
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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