Analysis of A Ballade of Jakko Hill

Rudyard Kipling 1865 (Mumbai) – 1936 (London)



One moment bid the horses wait,
 Since tiffin is not laid till three,
Below the upward path and straight
 You climbed a year ago with me.
Love came upon us suddenly
 And loosed -- an idle hour to kill --
A headless, armless armory
 That smote us both on Jakko Hill.

Ah Heaven! we would wait and wait
 Through Time and to Eternity!
Ah Heaven! we could conquer Fate
 With more than Godlike constancy
I cut the date upon a tree --
 Here stand the clumsy figures still:
"10-7-85, A.D."
 Damp with the mist of Jakko Hill.

What came of high resolve and great,
 And until Death fidelity!
Whose horse is waiting at your gate?
 Whose 'rickshaw-wheels ride over me?
No Saint's, I swear; and -- let me see
 To-night what names your programme fill --
We drift asunder merrily,
 As drifts the mist on Jakko Hill.

L'ENVOI.
Princess, behold our ancient state
 Has clean departed; and we see
'Twas Idleness we took for Fate
 That bound light bonds on you and me.
Amen! Here ends the comedy
 Where it began in all good will;
Since Love and Leave together flee
 As driven mist on Jakko Hill!


Scheme ABABBCBC ABABBCXC ABABBCBC XABABBCBC
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 11011111 01010101 11010111 11011100 011101011 0101100 1111111 11011101 11010100 11011101 1111100 11010101 11010101 1 1101111 11110101 00110100 11110111 1111101 11110111 1111111 11010100 1101111 1 100110101 11010011 11001111 11111101 01110100 11010111 11010101 1101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,066
Words 201
Sentences 17
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 9
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 203
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Rudyard Kipling

Joseph Rudyard Kipling was an English short-story writer, poet, and novelist chiefly remembered for his tales and poems of British soldiers in India and his tales for children. more…

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