Analysis of A Rusty Nail



I ran a nail into my hand,
      The wound was hard to heal;
So bitter was the pain to stand
      I thought how it would feel,
To have spikes thrust through hands and feet,
      Impaled by hammer beat.

Then hoisted on a cross of oak
      Against the sullen sky,
With all about the jeering follk
      Who joyed to see me die;
Die hardly in insensate heat,
      With bleeding hands and feet.

Yet was it not that day of Fate,
      Of cruelty insane,
Climaxing centuries of hate
      That woke our souls to pain!
And are we not the living seed
      Of those who did the deed!

Of course, with thankful heart I know
      We are not fiends as then;
And in a thousand years or so
      We may be gentle men.
But it has cost a poisoned hand,
      And pain beyond a cry,
To make me strangely understand
      A Cross against the sky.


Scheme ABABCC DEDECC FGFGHH IJIJAEAE
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111 011111 11010111 111111 11111101 011101 11010111 010101 11010101 111111 110011 110101 11111111 11001 110011 1110111 01110101 111101 11110111 111111 00010111 111101 11110101 010101 1111001 010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 822
Words 154
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 8
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Robert William Service

Robert William Service was a poet and writer sometimes referred to as the Bard of the Yukon He is best-known for his writings on the Canadian North including the poems The Shooting of Dan McGrew The Law of the Yukon and The Cremation of Sam McGee His writing was so expressive that his readers took him for a hard-bitten old Klondike prospector not the later-arriving bank clerk he actually was Robert William Service was born 16 January 1874 in Preston England but also lived in Scotland before emigrating to Canada in 1894 Service went to the Yukon Territory in 1904 as a bank clerk and became famous for his poems about this region which are mostly in his first two books of poetry He wrote quite a bit of prose as well and worked as a reporter for some time but those writings are not nearly as well known as his poems He travelled around the world quite a bit and narrowly escaped from France at the beginning of the Second World War during which time he lived in Hollywood California He died 11 September 1958 in France Incidentally he played himself in a movie called The Spoilers starring John Wayne and Marlene Dietrich more…

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