Analysis of Girl's Lament

Rainer Maria Rilke 1875 (Prague) – 1926 (Montreux)



In the years when we were
all children, this inclining
to be alone so much was gentle;
others' time passed fighting,
and one had one's faction,
one's near, one's far-off place,
a path, an animal, a picture.

And I still imagined, that life
would always keep providing
for one to dwell on things within,
Am I within myself not in what's greatest?
Shall what's mine no longer soothe
and understand me as a child?

Suddenly I'm as if cast out,
and this solitude surrounds me
as something vast and unbounded,
when my feeling, standing on the hills
of my breasts, cries out for wings
or for an end.

Translated by Edward Snow


Scheme ABXBXXA XBXXXX XXXXXX X
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 001110 11011 110111110 101110 011110 111111 011100010 01101011 111010 11111101 1101110110 1111101 0011101 10011111 0110011 11010010 111010101 1111111 1111 0101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 606
Words 114
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 6, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 18, 2023

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Rainer Maria Rilke

René Karl Wilhelm Johann Josef Maria Rilke — better known as Rainer Maria Rilke — was a Bohemian-Austrian poet and novelist, "widely recognized as one of the most lyrically intense German-language poets", writing in both verse and highly lyrical prose. more…

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