Analysis of Who makes these changes?

Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi 1207 (Balkh) – 1273 (Konya )



Who makes these changes?
I shoot an arrow right.
It lands left.
I ride after a deer and find myself
Chased by a hog.
I plot to get what I want
And end up in prison.
I dig pits to trap others
And fall in.

I should be suspicious
Of what I want.


Scheme XXXXXAXXX XA
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 111101 111 111001011 1101 1111111 011010 1111110 010 111010 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 240
Words 55
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 9, 2
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 06, 2023

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Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi

Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Rūmī also known as Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Balkhī, and more popularly simply as Rumi, was a 13th-century Persian poet, faqih, Islamic scholar, theologian, and Sufi mystic originally from Greater Khorasan in Greater Iran. more…

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