Analysis of If You Show Patience

Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi 1207 (Balkh) – 1273 (Konya )



If you show patience, I'll rid you of this virtue.
If you fall asleep, I'll rub the sleep from your eyes.
If you become a mountain, I'll melt you in fire.
And if you become an ocean, I'll drink all your water.


Scheme ABCC
Poetic Form
Metre 111101111110 111011101111 1101010111010 01101110111110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 214
Words 44
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 4
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi

Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Rūmī also known as Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Balkhī, and more popularly simply as Rumi, was a 13th-century Persian poet, faqih, Islamic scholar, theologian, and Sufi mystic originally from Greater Khorasan in Greater Iran. more…

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