Analysis of I Would I Were the Glow-Worm

Mathilde Blind 1841 (Mannheim) – 1896 (London)



I would I were the glow-worm, thou the flower,
That I might fill thy cup with glimmering light;
I would I were the bird, and thou the bower,
To sing thee songs throughout the summer night.

I would I were a pine tree deeply rooted,
And thou the lofty, cloud-beleaguered rock,
Still, while the blasts of heaven around us hooted,
To cleave to thee and weather every shock.

I would I were the rill, and thou the river;
So might I, leaping from some headlong steep,
With all my waters lost in thine for ever,
Be hurried onwards to the unfathomed deep.

I would--what would I not? O foolish dreaming!
My words are but as leaves by autumn shed,
That, in the faded moonlight idly gleaming,
Drop on the grave where all our love lies dead.


Scheme ABAB XCXC ADAD EFEF
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11100111010 11111111001 11100101010 1111010101 11100111010 0101010101 110111001110 11110101001 11100101010 111101111 11110101110 110101011 11111111010 1111111101 1001011010 11011110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 736
Words 138
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 141
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 09, 2023

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Mathilde Blind

Mathilde Blind, was a German-born British poet. Her work was praised by Matthew Arnold and French politician and historian Louis Blanc. more…

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