Analysis of Written For My Son In His Sickness, To One Of His School fellows.



I little thought that honest Dick
Would slight me so, when I was sick.
Is he a Friend, who only stays,
Whilst Health and Pleasure gild our Days;
Flies, when Disease our Temper sours,
Nor helps to pass the gloomy Hours?

Says my Mamma, who loves to make
Reflections for her Childrens sake;
You see how mortal Friendship ends--
My Child, secure celestial Friends:
Make Heav'n your chief, your early Care;
You'll meet no Disappointment there.
Build not on Length of Days, my Son;
Life's longest Race is quickly run.
Lay hold on ev'ry coming Hour;
Do all the Good that's in your Pow'r:
This will the sinking Heart sustain,
When Cordials are dispens'd in vain;
Asswage the racking Pains, that seize
On Limbs devoted to Disease;
The Place of fleeting Friends supply;
Pour balmy Slumbers on thine Eye;
Shield thee from Terrors of the Night,
And wing thy Pray'rs to Realms of Light;
Thy ev'ry painful Care dismiss,
And crown thee with eternal Bliss.


Scheme AABBCC DDEEFFGGXXHHIIJJKKLL
Poetic Form
Metre 11011101 11111111 11011101 110101101 1101101010 111101010 11101111 01010101 11110101 11010101 11111101 1110101 11111111 11011101 11111010 110110111 11010101 11010101 1010111 11010101 01110101 1101111 11110101 01111111 1110101 01110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 923
Words 167
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 6, 20
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 368
Words per stanza (avg) 83
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mary Barber

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