Analysis of To Alexander Berkman

Lola Ridge 1873 – 1941



Can you see me, Sasha?
  I can see you….
  A tentacle of the vast dawn is resting on your face
  that floats as though detached
  in a sultry and greenish vapor.
  I cannot reach my hands to you…
  would not if I could,
  though I know how warmly yours would close about them.
  Why?
  I do not know…
  I have a sense of shame.
  Your eyes hurt me… mysterious openings in the gray stone of your face
  through which your spirit streams out taut as a flag
  bearing strange symbols to the new dawn.

If I stay… projected, trembling against these bars filtering emaciated light… will your eyes… that bore their lonely way through mine… stop as at a friendly gate… grow warm… and luminous? … but I cannot stay… for the smell… I know… how the days pass… The prison squats with granite haunches on the young spring, battened under with its twisting green… and you… socket for every bolt piercing like a driven nail. Eyes stare you through the bars… eyes blank as a graveled yard… and the silence shuffles heavy dice of feet in iron corridors… until the day… that has soiled herself in this black hole to caress the pale mask of your face… withdraws the last wizened ray to wash in the infinite her discolored hands. Can you hear me, Sasha, in your surrounded darkness?


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
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Characters 1,300
Words 232
Sentences 12
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 14, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 65
Words per line (avg) 15
Letters per stanza (avg) 484
Words per stanza (avg) 115
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

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Lola Ridge

Lola Ridge was an anarchist poet and an influential editor of avant-garde feminist and Marxist publications best remembered for her long poems and poetic sequences She along with other political poets of the early Modernist period has been coming under increasing critical scrutiny at the beginning of the twenty-first century more…

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