Analysis of Today when you went up the hill

Lesbia Harford 1891 (Brighton) – 1927 (Australia)



Today when you went up the hill
And all that I could see
Was just a speck of black and white
Very far from me,
It seemed more strange than words can say,
The dot that I could see,
Really was the dearest thing
The world holds for me.


Scheme ABCBDBEB
Poetic Form
Metre 01111101 011111 11011101 10111 11111111 011111 1010101 01111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 240
Words 51
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 180
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lesbia Harford

Lesbia Harford was an Australian poet, novelist and political activist. more…

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