Analysis of Sometimes I watch you, mark your brooding eyes

Lesbia Harford 1891 (Brighton) – 1927 (Australia)



Sometimes I watch you, mark your brooding eyes,
Your grave brow over-weighted with deep thought,
Your mouth's straight line — details of such a sort
That all aloofness in your aspect lies.
And yet when in the dark down from above
You swoop like a great bird or God himself
To kiss, your lips have curves. What changeling elf
Is that soft mouth of passionate close love?


Scheme ABCADEED
Poetic Form
Metre 0111111101 1111010111 1111011101 110100111 0110011101 1110111101 111111111 1111110011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 379
Words 69
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 293
Words per stanza (avg) 67
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lesbia Harford

Lesbia Harford was an Australian poet, novelist and political activist. more…

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