Analysis of Pruning Flowering Gums

Lesbia Harford 1891 (Brighton) – 1927 (Australia)



One summer day, along the street,
Men pruned the gums
To make them neat.
The tender branches, white with flowers,
Lay in the sun
For hours and hours,
And every hour they grew more sweet,
More honey-like
Until the street
Smelt like a hive, withouten bees.
But still the gardeners
Lopped the trees.
Then came the children out of school,
Noisy and separate
As their rule Of being is. The spangled trees
Gave them one heart:
Such power to please
Had all the flowering branches strown
Around for them
To make their own.
Then such a murmuring arose
As made the ears
Confirm the nose
And give the lie to eyes. For hours
Child bees hummed
In the honey flowers.
They gathered sprigs and armfuls. Some
Ran with their fragrant
Burdens home,
And still returned; and after them
Would drag great boughs.
Some stripped a stem
Of rosy flowers and played with these.
Never such love
Had earthly trees
As these young creatures gave. By night,
The treasured sprays
Of their delight
Were garnered every one. The street
Looked, as the council liked it, neat.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (45%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 11010101 1101 1111 010101110 1001 110010 0100101111 1101 0101 110111 110100 101 11010111 10010 11111010101 1111 11011 110100101 0111 1111 11010001 1101 0101 010111110 111 001010 1101011 11110 101 01010101 1111 1101 110100111 1011 1101 11110111 0101 1101 010100101 11010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,045
Words 187
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 40
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 825
Words per stanza (avg) 185
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lesbia Harford

Lesbia Harford was an Australian poet, novelist and political activist. more…

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