Analysis of Proem



I LOVE the old melodious lays
Which softly melt the ages through,
The songs of Spenser’s golden days,
Arcadian Sidney’s silvery phrase,
Sprinkling our noon of time with freshest morning dew.

Yet, vainly in my quiet hours
To breathe their marvellous notes I try;
I feel them, as the leaves and flowers
In silence feel the dewy showers,
And drink with glad, still lips the blessing of the sky.

The rigor of a frozen clime,
The harshness of an untaught ear,
The jarring words of one whose rhyme
Beat often Labor’s hurried time,
Or Duty’s rugged march through storm and strife, are here.

Of mystic beauty, dreamy grace,
No rounded art the lack supplies;
Unskilled the subtle lines to trace,
Or softer shades of Nature’s face,
I view her common forms with unanointed eyes.

Nor mine the seer-like power to show
The secrets of the heart and mind;
To drop the plummet-line below
Our common world of joy and woe,
A more intense despair or brighter hope to find.

Yet here at least an earnest sense
Of human right and weal is shown;
A hate of tyranny intense,
And hearty in its vehemence,
As if my brother’s pain and sorrow were my own.

O Freedom! if to me belong
Nor mighty Milton’s gift divine,
Nor Marvell’s wit and graceful song,
Still with a love as deep and strong
As theirs, I lay, like them, my best gifts on thy shrine!


Scheme ABAAB CDCCD EFEEF GHGGH IJIIJ KLKXL MNMMN
Poetic Form
Metre 110101001 11010101 01110101 10011001 1010111110101 110011010 1111111 111101010 010101010 011111010101 01010101 0101111 01011111 11010101 11101110111 11010101 11010101 01010111 11011101 110101111 110111011 01010101 11010101 101011101 010101110111 11111101 11010111 01110001 01001100 111101010011 11011101 1101101 1110101 11011101 111111111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,313
Words 242
Sentences 9
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 148
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:12 min read
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John Greenleaf Whittier

John Greenleaf Whittier was an influential American Quaker poet and ardent advocate of the abolition of slavery in the United States. more…

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