Analysis of Mr. Hammond's Parable--The Dreamer

James Whitcomb Riley 1849 (Greenfield) – 1916 (Indianapolis)



He was a Dreamer of the Days:
Indolent as a lazy breeze
Of midsummer, in idlest ways
Lolling about in the shade of trees.
The farmer turned--as he passed him by
Under the hillside where he kneeled
Plucking a flower--with scornful eye
And rode ahead in the harvest field
Muttering--'Lawz! ef that-air shirk
Of a boy was mine fer a week er so,
He'd quit _dreamin'_ and git to work
And _airn_ his livin'--er--Well! _I_ know!'
And even kindlier rumor said,
Tapping with finger a shaking head,--
'Got such a curious kind o' way--
Wouldn't surprise me much, I say!'

Lying limp, with upturned gaze
Idly dreaming away his days.
No companions? Yes, a book
Sometimes under his arm he took
To read aloud to a lonesome brook.
And school-boys, truant, once had heard
A strange voice chanting, faint and dim--
Followed the echoes, and found it him,
Perched in a tree-top like a bird,
Singing, clean from the highest limb;
And, fearful and awed, they all slipped by
To wonder in whispers if he could fly.
'Let him alone!' his father said
When the old schoolmaster came to say,
'He took no part in his books to-day--
Only the lesson the readers read.--
His mind seems sadly going astray!'
'Let him alone!' came the mournful tone,
And the father's grief in his sad eyes shone--
Hiding his face in his trembling hand,
Moaning, 'Would I could understand!
But as heaven wills it I accept
Uncomplainingly!' So he wept.

Then went 'The Dreamer' as he willed,
As uncontrolled as a light sail filled
Flutters about with an empty boat
Loosed from its moorings and afloat:
Drifted out from the busy quay
Of dull school-moorings listlessly;
Drifted off on the talking breeze,
All alone with his reveries;
Drifted on, as his fancies wrought--
Out on the mighty gulfs of thought.

The farmer came in the evening gray
And took the bars of the pasture down;
Called to the cows in a coaxing way,
'Bess' and 'Lady' and 'Spot' and 'Brown,'
While each gazed with a wide-eyed stare,
As though surprised at his coming there--
Till another tone, in a higher key,
Brought their obeyance lothfully.

Then, as he slowly turned and swung
The topmost bar to its proper rest,
Something fluttered along and clung
An instant, shivering at his breast--
A wind-scared fragment of legal cap,
Which darted again, as he struck his hand
On his sounding chest with a sudden slap,
And hurried sailing across the land.
But as it clung he had caught the glance
Of a little penciled countenance,
And a glamour of written words; and hence,
A minute later, over the fence,
'Here and there and gone astray
Over the hills and far away,'
He chased it into a thicket of trees
And took it away from the captious breeze.

A scrap of paper with a rhyme
Scrawled upon it of summertime:
A pencil-sketch of a dairy-maid,
Under a farmhouse porch's shade,
Working merrily; and was blent
With her glad features such sweet content,
That a song she sung in the lines below
Seemed delightfully _apropos_:--


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Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 10010101 1110011 100100111 010111111 1001111 100101101 010100101 10011111 1011110101 1110111 011100111 0101101 101100101 110100111 10011111 101111 10100111 1010101 01101111 110110101 01110111 01110101 100100111 10011101 10110101 010011111 1100101111 11011101 10110111 111101111 100100101 111101001 110110101 0010101111 1011011001 1011101 111011101 1111 11010111 10110111 100111101 11110001 10110101 11110100 10110101 10111100 10111101 11010111 010100101 010110101 110100101 10100101 11110111 110111101 1010100101 1111 11110101 01111101 10100101 110100111 011101101 1100111111 1110110101 010100101 111111101 101010100 0010110101 010101001 1010101 10010101 1110101011 011011011 01110101 1011110 010110101 100111 10100011 101101110 1011100101 101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,858
Words 534
Sentences 21
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 16, 23, 10, 8, 16, 8
Lines Amount 81
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 378
Words per stanza (avg) 87
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:40 min read
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James Whitcomb Riley

James Whitcomb Riley was an American writer, poet, and best-selling author. During his lifetime he was known as the "Hoosier Poet" and "Children's Poet" for his dialect works and his children's poetry respectively. more…

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