Analysis of Away

James Whitcomb Riley 1849 (Greenfield) – 1916 (Indianapolis)



I cannot say, and I will not say
That he is dead--. He is just away!

With a cheery smile, and a wave of the hand
He has wandered into an unknown land,

And left us dreaming how very fair
It needs must be, since he lingers there.

And you-- O you, who the wildest yearn
For the old-time step and the glad return--,

Think of him faring on, as dear
In the love of There as the love of Here;

And loyal still, as he gave the blows
Of his warrior-strength to his country's foes--.

Mild and gentle, as he was brave--,
When the sweetest love of his life he gave

To simple things--: Where the violets grew
Blue as the eyes they were likened to,

The touches of his hands have strayed
As reverently as his lips have prayed:

When the little brown thrush that harshly chirred
Was dear to him as the mocking-bird;

And he pitied as much as a man in pain
A writhing honey-bee wet with rain--.

Think of him still as the same, I say:
He is not dead-- he is just away!


Scheme AA BB CC DD XX EE FF GG HH BX II AA
Poetic Form
Metre 110101111 111111101 10101001101 1110011011 011101101 111111101 011110101 1011100101 11110111 0011110111 010111101 11100111101 10101111 1010111111 1101101001 110110101 01011111 1100011111 1010111101 111110101 0111110101 010101111 111110111 111111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 932
Words 191
Sentences 7
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 02, 2023

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James Whitcomb Riley

James Whitcomb Riley was an American writer, poet, and best-selling author. During his lifetime he was known as the "Hoosier Poet" and "Children's Poet" for his dialect works and his children's poetry respectively. more…

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